young and shy

I wrote this poem in my journaling class and was not happy with it.  I have rewritten it and tried to improve it but I think it still needs more work.  Following this poem I am going to attempt to write a poem on the real prompt.

Write a "first moment" poem

It was a time when I was young

It was a time when I was shy

I looked at her

but let her pass me by

It was a time when our voices were strong

It was a time of glorious song

I sang with her

but let her pass me by

it was a time when the music was right

It was a time we could dance all night

I danced with her

but let her pass me by

It was a time I looked for her and she was not there

It was I time I ask her why

I wanted her badly

but let her pass me by

It was a time she did not come

It was a time I did not ask

I assumed she would be there

but let her pass me by.

It was a time when I was young

It was a time when I was shy

I really wanted to be with her

but let her pass me by.

a first moment poem

I felt her voice
through my heart

I saw her eyes
through my heart

I heard her words
through my heart

her voice, her words, here eyes
are my heart
                                             gsbatty